Hello!
I am launching an online comic strip which will be updated week to week. Its pg-13 humor and all work safe.
let me know your thoughts.
www.pienertown.com
enjoy
2006-09-27 05:45:45 · 8 answers · asked by MR PIB 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Visual Arts ➔ Drawing & Illustration
I think your art work is fine and different but you really need to expand your vocabulary so to reach a much wider audience and not just low life's who like to read smut!
2006-09-27 12:42:59 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, I woud have to agree with the comment below. Your character development needs work. Your artwork is fantastic. I love the colors and concept. Its just a shame that the words get in the way. If you can find something a little more interesting to say or write, I think this comic would be amazing. I'm sure there are alot of talented and funny people out there that would love to express there jokes through your art work.
2006-09-27 13:48:35 · answer #2 · answered by Crazzychk 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
As a commercial artist, I have to agree that your art is very good, and deserves better material. Listen to some comic one-liners and try to illustrate them. Always give the comics credit or even send them a copy of your work. Eventually, you may come up with good story lines of your own, but that is a talent in itself, so don't give up if you can't get the feel for writing. There are plenty of people out there who see the humor in life that'll give you ideas.
2006-09-27 14:26:24 · answer #3 · answered by angrygramma 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The art design is great but the storyboarding and writing isn't great. Either improve your writing ideas or collaborate with someone else who does that really well and draw up a vision together. A good example of a good art director but bad writer = George Star Wars Lucas.
2006-09-29 16:35:54 · answer #4 · answered by djprall 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your not going to like my opinion - However it's got a positive and constructive spin -
Your technique and style is WAY, WAY more eye-popping and entertaining than the dialogues and punchlines you deliver... Visual art by itself can express genuine laughs - and yours really does!
Much better than lots of the nationally syndicated junk out there!
----In my opinion, you need a collaborator or source of material for your characters! A source of cutting edge joke ideas to match your cutting edge visuals! I hope you do this, because as it is--- (and I have a bizarre sick and twisted sense of humor myself!)--- I wish I didn't need to dissapoint you, or sound like a dickhe@d --the jokes didn't do much for me........
You really deserve the Best of Luck in your success!!
We wanna see more!
2006-09-27 12:49:17 · answer #5 · answered by ? 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think the artwork is fantastic. If you want me to I can help you with the jokes. Definately, get in touch with me and I can help out with some better setups and punch lines. Other than that the colors and imagry are wonderful. Good luck !
2006-09-27 17:09:27 · answer #6 · answered by zooe047 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very interesting! A bit over the top for me but I can appreciate your talent!
2006-09-27 12:58:49 · answer #7 · answered by happymonkie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hang in there
2006-09-27 12:53:43 · answer #8 · answered by wil_t52 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋