I am a 14 year old girl. I wrote this poem. I entered it into a few poerty contests... do u think i have a shot at being a semi - finalist? do u like it?? let me know! Thanks!
Time
Your picture is above my bed.
You are the last thing I think about before I fall asleep.
I can't help thinking about you.
Our friendship is no longer, which brings tears to my eyes.
For you are the only one that really ever had my heart.
I must close the door on yesterday, for it is time.
Time that may one day, come back to the future.
Good byes mean forever.
See you later means that one day, time will bring us together again.
I am no longer bitter, for what we had was good in it's time.
No matter how much time passes before our reunion, I will always be concerned about you.
No amount of time can change that.
I look forward to the day, that I can call you my friend.
So no matter what, see you later, forever.
2006-09-26 17:59:55 · 10 answers · asked by an14341991 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
You rock! If you don't win, you can tell me and I'll kick the judges azz for you!
2006-09-26 18:02:38 · answer #1 · answered by Du Hast mich? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
which contest did u eneter it in cuz there this one that scams. itz called international library of poetry. go to poetryscams.com to see if they r scamming contest but i luv ur poem
2006-09-27 01:40:38 · answer #2 · answered by _~^*^~_ Ninja Fighter_~^*^~_ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! The poem could be addressed to anyone.(friend to friend, daughter to mother, lover to lover, anyone)
2006-09-27 01:05:38 · answer #3 · answered by halokitty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats very well written i do believe you will have agood shot at winning, congrats and good luck
2006-09-27 01:07:51 · answer #4 · answered by CHERRYSCION 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg i luv! i do think it has a chance of making it to the semi-finals! its really good!
2006-09-27 01:03:53 · answer #5 · answered by 2Cute2bTrue 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it.
Sure, you have a shot.
(dont write your age when asking questions)
2006-09-27 01:03:29 · answer #6 · answered by kahoonas 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is plain awesome and deep!! are you an143419912 ? because she also posted a poem that's exactly like this...
2006-09-27 02:30:13 · answer #7 · answered by oddzilla 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was beautiful. I wonder, who did you write that about?
2006-09-27 01:13:11 · answer #8 · answered by Special nobody 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was great and you deserve to win!
2006-09-27 01:04:14 · answer #9 · answered by toughguy2 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good job
2006-09-27 01:04:10 · answer #10 · answered by ~♥~ *CHEEKY* ~♥~ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋