What if I knew to much. What if it was all inside. What if I do to such. What someone does not provide. yeah I tell it like it is. I have to make an incision. So I fight with this. Only to make a damn decision. I wage a war all day. I command my thoughts. I stage a floor a say. I stand by shots. The ones from the mental gun. The reloaded brain cannon. I run from the sentimental fun. My devoted brain damage. I hate to wave the white flag. My denial I let loose. I wait to see the sights at. My own trial I produce. When I claim to no longer care. I only want to find it. I aim to be stronger there. I think I want to rewind ****. I shall take on my new past. I hate my old future. I vow to make do at last. I know I told the computer. I have many keys to unlock. I am not chained down. So a penny please for thought. Whose got brains now. Like a window stare with a peek. The same world that won't stop I'm out in. I can win so there is a peak. You know I was on top of the mountain.
2006-09-26 16:38:07 · 6 answers · asked by Thin King 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
That was the worst piece of feces I have ever heard. I'm no rap expert(whatever the hell that is) but I can tell you as a rapper to a white kid form the suburbs YOU ARE GARBAGE!!!!!!!! Never put this on here again.
2006-09-26 16:45:03 · answer #1 · answered by St.Christopher the militant. lol 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It would depend on the delivery...this has a Fort Minor flow to it [which isn't necessarily a good thing]. There's no feeling. You're just using up syllables and trying to make words rhyme. You're following a pattern. Follow emotion and it will write itself.
2006-09-27 06:15:35 · answer #2 · answered by Black&Orange 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
uh, so wats the question...do we think that would be a good rap song?? nope
2006-09-26 23:43:25 · answer #3 · answered by kalkidan62003 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds good
2006-09-26 23:43:53 · answer #4 · answered by Gabe-Rail 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow..um ok what exactly are you saying here?
2006-09-27 00:10:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
ok what about it ?
2006-09-26 23:44:23 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋