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Since Sina.com passed this significant milestone in 2004, the initial assessment of internal controls is behind them. It is now reflecting on its first-year's implementation experiences, identifying lessons learned throughout the process, and determining ways to enhance their activities moving forward.

2006-09-26 15:41:03 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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whatever was implemented in the first year, (new marketing strategies for instance, may have been changed and/or added) and the problems and/or successes and changes if any, with these new startegies throughout that year,,,,,, are now being analyzed.

is what it means.

2006-09-26 15:53:14 · answer #1 · answered by steelmadison 4 · 0 0

Sentences like that are specifically designed to make the author sound smart, rather than to communicate a thought.

Ironically, such writing nearly always has the opposite effect. Truly intelligent people know that the purpose of writing is to communicate, and that unnecessary wordiness is counterproductive.

2006-09-26 22:45:49 · answer #2 · answered by Privratnik 5 · 0 0

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