I get mad so I run away
To try and face it another day
But it never works out that way
It comes back and whispers in my ear that its here to stay
But I wont be stopped
I fight it and fight it until I pop
All my anger comes out and then I drop
I cry and cry. Itll never stop
Then this voice inside my head tells me hide
To act like a man as though I never cried
I tell him I cant my problems will fallow
They always do for without them Im hallow
Ive spent 2 years inside my cage
When all Ive done is raise my rage
My darkness inside
I say its not there but I lied
Soon the axe will fall
And kill until there is nothing left at all
Except for me
AND HIM!!!
2006-09-26 13:44:25 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
That is beautiful, but really you shouldn't be so down on yourself like that. Do your thing and be happy with it, that's all there is to it.
2006-09-26 14:16:10 · answer #1 · answered by nazidyke420 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
2006-09-26 20:55:20 · answer #2 · answered by vernise2679 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good. just 1 question do u have any anger issues? u might want to try anger managment
2006-09-26 21:03:44 · answer #3 · answered by toocool 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its the 'in' thing to come out these days - maybe that's what you need to do? tell him or tell someone about how you feel. beautiful poem by the way
2006-09-26 20:49:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
dont space it out so far. made it way too hard to read
2006-09-26 20:46:26 · answer #5 · answered by killxmexkissxme 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2006-09-26 20:48:03 · answer #6 · answered by Bessie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2006-09-26 20:54:24 · answer #7 · answered by darkangel1111 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, keep working on it.
2006-09-26 20:47:46 · answer #8 · answered by sherriecrazyhome 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE IT...I THINK THAT IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN
2006-09-26 20:46:44 · answer #9 · answered by CHASE_ME 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good.
2006-09-26 20:46:10 · answer #10 · answered by yo yo grl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋