I wrote this poem.
Time
Your picture is above my bed.
You are the last thing I think about before I fall asleep.
I cant help thinking about you.
Our friendship is no longer, which brings tears to my eyes.
For you are the only one that really ever had my heart.
I must close the door on yesterday, for it is time.
Time that may one day, come back to the future.
Goodbyes mean forever, see you later means that one day, time will bring us together again.
I am no longer bitter, for what we had was good in it’s time.
No matter how much time passes before our reunion.
I will always be concerned about you.
No amount of time can change that.
I look forward to the day, that I can call you my friend.
So no matter what. See you later. Forever.
2006-09-26 13:13:58 · 38 answers · asked by an14341991 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Your writing is very good and sincere, whoever it is will really be sorry for losing your friendship, but if it's a true friendship, it doesn't just go away forever, just lounging for a while, good luck in your future.
2006-09-26 13:18:18 · answer #1 · answered by greenheadchick 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's good. Is it regarding a boyfriend or girlfriend? I used to write poems like that about my relationships. I can say, dating is the best and worst thing. I've been married now for 4 years, and I look back on the days when I was dating a lot of people. Out of all of the people I dated, there were 3 that I never regretted, and about 20 that I really regretted. Broken hearts happen. If a break up happens, weather or not you end up being friends with your ex, it always turns out good in the end. Every person you date is a learning experience...helping you figure out what you really want and need in a partner. Finally, when the time comes, you won't regret any heartbreaks, hurt, or anger, because it led you to where you are.
You have good insight. Great poem
2006-09-26 13:18:50 · answer #2 · answered by jesse s 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have written a poem about someone that you have once/still do care very deeply about.....and now you have decided to try and move on and possibly you could be together in the future (hope that is close to what you meant by it...lol) ....I liked it, it is the only one on here that has kept my attention enough to read all the way to the end....I hope it all works out for you!!! Good Luck
2006-09-26 13:17:28 · answer #3 · answered by Brown_Eyed_Girl 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I wept and then I masturbated. Needs something- but it is a good start. Polish it up a little maybe-when someone reads this the first thing they should think of is hanging themselves followed closely by the urge to **** off.
You might be Gay if...you are still writing poetry and not going out to find a new G/F. Get some today!
2006-09-26 13:18:31 · answer #4 · answered by RHJ Cortez 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thumbs-up
2006-09-26 13:19:15 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful.
2006-09-26 13:20:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a wonderful poem; but so sad. You'll feel better after a little time goes by. Although it's a cliche, "Time heals all wounds" is true.
2006-09-26 13:18:11 · answer #7 · answered by traveller 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you're engrossed in a clock while being miserable about your old boyfriend.
Stop staring at that clock and get a new friend, good luck!
2006-09-26 13:16:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
very touching, and to the point. u must be a very sensitive person. or a very loving person. i wish i could write like that. i hope u save them u should send them in some where.
2006-09-26 13:52:40 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Time? How about The Stalker instead
2006-09-26 13:16:15 · answer #10 · answered by just browsin 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋