Your picture is above my bed.
You are the last thing I think about before I fall asleep.
I cant help thinking about you.
Our friendship is no longer, which brings tears to my eyes.
For you are the only one that really ever had my heart.
I must close the door on yesterday, for it is time.
Time that may one day, come back to the future.
Goodbyes mean forever, see you later means that one day, time will bring us together again.
I am no longer bitter, for what we had was good in it’s time.
No matter how much time passes before our reunion.
I will always be concerned about you.
No amount of time can change that.
I look forward to the day, that I can call you my friend.
So no matter what. See you later. Forever.
2006-09-26 11:32:02 · 9 answers · asked by an14341991 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
{sniffle}... I gotta tell you, that really pulls the heartstrings. i like it, it has the raw emotion that the narrator/writer feels. if that's based on true emotions, events and such, my heart goes out to you. it's a great poem, you should go public with it.
2006-09-26 11:36:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
All attachment must be severed, and excessive attachment is more difficult to sever. Life is a continuous meeting and leaving and the sooner one learns to do so physically and not emotionally, the better player one becomes, and the more joy one finds in the play.
2006-09-26 11:38:09 · answer #2 · answered by docjp 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, it's very intense and I can actually 'feel' what you are saying. It makes a lot of sense too. Time will heal the hurt and friends you will be. I know this coz I been there.
2006-09-26 11:38:48 · answer #3 · answered by intenseone 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Try putting it on a poetry website they will be able to give you some more informed opinions.
2006-09-26 11:36:56 · answer #4 · answered by gettingmadtoday 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its nice, but i have never really gotten poems that don't rhyme somewhat. But its what you feel inside, so its all good.
2006-09-26 11:36:16 · answer #5 · answered by bobbie21brady 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's nice.
2006-09-26 11:41:25 · answer #6 · answered by tourist 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really don't like peotry buttttttttt it's nice
2006-09-26 11:39:06 · answer #7 · answered by ~DTP~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ITS A BEAUTIFL POEM I LIKED IT ALOT
2006-09-26 11:37:57 · answer #8 · answered by nacho_man23 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's butiful. I like it alot.
2006-09-26 11:35:15 · answer #9 · answered by godrockinkid 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋