I wrote this poem.
Your picture is above my bed.
You are the last thing I think about before I fall asleep.
I cant help thinking about you.
Our friendship is no longer, which brings tears to my eyes.
For you are the only one that really ever had my heart.
I must close the door on yesterday, for it is time.
Time that may one day, come back to the future.
Goodbyes mean forever, see you later means that one day, time will bring us together again.
I am no longer bitter, for what we had was good in it’s time.
No matter how much time passes before our reunion.
I will always be concerned about you.
No amount of time can change that.
I look forward to the day, that I can call you my friend.
So matter what. See you later. Forever.
2006-09-26 11:08:52 · 8 answers · asked by an14341991 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Oh my god...that is such an awesome poem. It sounds so sincere and meaningful....You´ve got ALOT of talent....its really good, and i really like that last line.."So matter what. See you later. Forever."...it really made me feel like i can relate. Thank you for sharing your great poem. Im positive that you´re gonna go really far. Keep up the good work. =))
2006-09-26 11:17:43 · answer #1 · answered by Jaded 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like it is heartfelt and sincere. It also sounds like the type of poem you should keep in your journal, rather than sending to the person you are writing about.
2006-09-26 11:16:16 · answer #2 · answered by J.Z. 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think that is a good poem. You have nice talent and express yourself really well through your poetry.
2006-09-26 11:47:13 · answer #3 · answered by Nico 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it its pretty good souds kinda like a beginner poem but its still really good kinda free flowing
2006-09-26 11:13:29 · answer #4 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice go to my site and u can see my poem too ur good
2006-09-26 11:11:08 · answer #5 · answered by Sarah 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it makes me feel sad about a friendship i lost that didnt want to go
2006-09-26 11:11:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Touching and deep!
2006-09-26 11:15:08 · answer #7 · answered by lainey lain 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It's deep and it flows well. You're a good poet. : )
2006-09-26 11:14:20 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋