I'll look for one with happieness,
Who never has a frown,
I'll fill his head up endlessly,
And then I'll bring him down.
When I take you down with me,
There won't be another day,
When you leave anywhere in this world,
Withount painting skies gray.
There always is a tragedy,
Just waiting to be found,
And soon I'll have you crying,
At the dog **** on the ground
Come and live down here with me,
With me you'll have no friend,
Instead we'll wait here finding,
Happieness that we can end
2006-09-26 10:46:53 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
AWESOME! i love it
2006-09-26 10:48:29 · answer #1 · answered by hawaiihg 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i actaully really likes it. kinda goth and dark with a hint o truth. ppl can really bring others down and the thought is almost amusing
2006-09-26 17:49:19 · answer #2 · answered by killxmexkissxme 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Tis good, but a pretty bleak outlook, sir.
2006-09-26 17:55:54 · answer #3 · answered by Rick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
started out good & then it just lost me after the first part
2006-09-26 17:59:01 · answer #4 · answered by JeenaBlahBlahBlah 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it f!_!ck!n sucks. J/K, LOL. Seriously though it's really good almost sounds like a song. :)
2006-09-26 17:51:54 · answer #5 · answered by MLJ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. I hope you write upbeat poems also.
2006-09-26 17:49:18 · answer #6 · answered by Ragdoll 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome! Keep it up
2006-09-26 17:56:56 · answer #7 · answered by Chicken7065 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
needs improvement
2006-09-26 17:48:45 · answer #8 · answered by James Blond 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad, but seems kinda mean and strange lol
2006-09-26 17:58:42 · answer #9 · answered by killer_kitty_2010 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
GOOD JOB RYHMEING BUT THE POEM SUCKS
2006-09-26 17:49:20 · answer #10 · answered by JEANETTE V 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is very good , depresssing but very good
2006-09-26 17:53:06 · answer #11 · answered by StarShine G 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋