“Oh, no you don’t,” the man said. He grabbed him and shoved him into the basement.
Don gasped as the man walked down the stairs and grabbed Don’s arm. “A little insurance, Jake, so you don’t try and escape again,” he replied. He held up the knife, and it glistered in the sunlight…
“No!” Don yelled flinging himself against the wall as the man started to cut one of his fingers. “No, no! Let me go! STOP!! Please don’t’! I’m not Jake! Stop!!!!” he yelled and yanked it away as the man made a cut. A trail of blood hung down.
2006-09-26 03:11:24 · 12 answers · asked by dOnNa 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
"you liar"
"no please you have to believe me, my name is don, please, pleasew just stop it"
the man looked at him hard, let go and asked wheres Jake.
"i don't know, please you have to believe me"
He takes Don and says, "come with me"..............
2006-09-26 03:15:48 · answer #1 · answered by Blair Waldorf 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. 2!
2006-09-26 12:30:18 · answer #2 · answered by Anry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
# 2
2006-09-26 10:33:39 · answer #3 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As Don looked at the floor with his finger laying on it he said " at least you don't have to worry about me pointing a finger at you in a police line up!!
2006-09-26 10:15:41 · answer #4 · answered by Tired Old Man 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I don't know what should come next, but I noticed that they were in the basement, so I don't think the knife would actually glisten in the sunlight.
But it DOES sound interesting :-)
2006-09-26 10:15:29 · answer #5 · answered by no1home2day 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why is the knife glistening in the sunlight if they are in a basement?
2006-09-26 10:14:46 · answer #6 · answered by zia269 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The 2nd paragraph.
2006-09-26 10:14:26 · answer #7 · answered by Je♥n 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#3
2006-09-26 10:14:19 · answer #8 · answered by JaMoke 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one...sounds more action packed
2006-09-26 10:13:28 · answer #9 · answered by GD-Fan 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First one is better. As for what happens next,..well it's your story darlin.
cheers
2006-09-26 10:14:39 · answer #10 · answered by scully_22ps 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't know maybe the real jake should walk in
2006-09-26 10:13:20 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋