In conclusion or to sumarize this essay.i want it to be more professional sounding.any ideas?thanks.
2006-09-24 17:33:52 · 12 answers · asked by Miss.Tubby Bear 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Use the word. "Thus" as in Thus, the average person in America is fascinated by the Internet - just an example.
I always used Thus, it works as a smooth transition from the previous paragraph and it makes ur essay sound better. Plus, it lets the reader know that u have reached the conclusion.
2006-09-24 17:46:01 · answer #1 · answered by *SaL* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Talk about the main three points that you mentioned in your thesis or introductory paragraph, but use different words so it is not an obvious copy of your first paragraph. Then go on to point out the main conclusions of your entire paper, the main points that you were trying to make in as few sentences as possible.
2006-09-24 17:41:51 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Look at your thesis and try to summarize that and the points you've made. For example- if you said, the sky is blue, and your 3 points are stating why the sky is blue, then your closing should be summarizing all the info you used to make your point. "In conclusion" or "as you can see".
2006-09-24 17:42:51 · answer #3 · answered by Goldylocks 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your closing paragraph should be your "So What?" of your essay. As in, if I'm the reader, I've just received all of this information. Now I want to know why it matters. How should I apply that?
If that makes sense at all.
2006-09-24 17:43:30 · answer #4 · answered by bigassfencer 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The foregoing should make it clear, even to the dullest morons, such as yourselves for example, that...
If yours is a medical essay regarding the byproducts of digestion, you can wind it up by saying "Thus," farting really loudly, and then returning to your desk to sit down.
2006-09-24 17:48:51 · answer #5 · answered by David S 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Say "As a professional essay writer" and then continue.
2006-09-24 17:36:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well your conclusion is supposed to summarize your essay, thats the professional way
2006-09-24 17:39:34 · answer #7 · answered by jonnybanas18 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am confident that you have been convinced by the intuitiveness of the issues addressed in the preceding discussion and would now logically conclude that ........
2006-09-24 19:36:43 · answer #8 · answered by galopin_1872 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Reword your opening paragraph to make it sound more 'ending' like.
I don't see how "In conclusion" isn't 'proffesional sounding', though. I don't know how more proffesional you can get, LOL!
2006-09-24 17:43:32 · answer #9 · answered by Shaikoh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Clearly the above examples show that ________________.
Insert your position.
2006-09-24 17:36:52 · answer #10 · answered by silentcargo 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋