whatddyathink??

Question

of the song i wrote... its called whenevr

come
stay awhile
ill invite you in
if you need a frined
im here,
till the end
just call my name
and ill be here
for you
WHENEVR

Answer 1

sounds a bit like 2 or 3 different songs rolled into one, lyrically.

Answer 2

Nice. You should consider adding another verse or two, however.

Answer 3

i think it sounds pretty kewl. short and sweet, but it gets a huge point across.