your harsh words are what make her cry
its not my job, f*** you, maybe tonight i'll die
your breaking her heart and inside she's falling apart
do you think this doesnt effect her too
you don't know the things she has to go through
get a job, your lazy, f*** your driving me crazy!
I'm sorry she screams as her eyes get hazy
you make her feel inferior, horrible, worthless
her needs, wants and feeling repress
but what does it matter she says to herself
as she cries herself to sleep...
2006-09-24 16:25:48 · 20 answers · asked by jessica 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
he's my huband...
2006-09-24 16:37:37 · update #1
the 2nd and 6th lines are things he's said to me.. i stay with him because i love him and for our baby..(he's in iraq)
2006-09-24 17:47:55 · update #2
Are you the one hearing these words? Your avatar picture looks so sad, so my guess would be that you might be the one hearing these words about yourself. If I am correct, please talk to someone that you trust, a teacher, a pastor, an aunt, neighbor, friend's parent, counselor.....because these are words that a extremely abusive, ones that can harm for years to come.....
I pray that you find that perfect person you can trust and get some help before further harm comes to you emotionally....
I also pray that I am wrong with my conclusion and that you are just writing what you feel in your mind.....God be with you.
2006-09-24 16:34:39 · answer #1 · answered by jenny 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well as poetry it's f**king awful, but the point is that if you are so unhappy in your relationship then why are you still there?
What's the payoff for being with someone you dislike that much? Figure out what the payoff is, what you are getting by being in your situation, and then get the payoff some other way because I don't think you should stay with your partner from this (awful) poem.
Good luck! Love the universe, and it will love you back!
2006-09-24 17:22:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was really good. but maybe instead of going in the pattern of
A
A
B
B
C
C
try going
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
and so on...
try to work it out and see how it sounds. I personally think it would flow better. But if you dont like it you can always keep it the way it is! good job!! =)
2006-09-24 16:29:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are these parents saying these things and these are your feeling as the child? What ever it is that's bad and you need to try to separate yourself from it. I don't know but I'm praying about this one.
2006-09-24 16:33:48 · answer #4 · answered by jennifer e 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You had better get some Prozac , lithium , zanex or something like that cause you really need it you have one hell of a chemical imbalance .
2006-09-24 17:05:05 · answer #5 · answered by Butterfly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this sounds like the worst type of psychotic depression. Someone needs help quickly.
2006-09-24 16:37:33 · answer #6 · answered by geri11066 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it sounds like part of a song by Staind or Disturbed or somebody like that. Nice try though.
2006-09-24 16:30:51 · answer #7 · answered by Terri R 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have a talent for writing. can see that it came from your heart. You seem to be an open-minded person, one who speaks their mind freely. I loved it, very creative.
2006-09-24 16:28:55 · answer #8 · answered by Iyanna A 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You,her,me,she, and I...is it 2 people or 3? Very depressing...makes me feel depressed just reading it.
2006-09-24 16:38:02 · answer #9 · answered by my two cents 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think whomever wrote it needs therapy. Go get some help.
2006-09-24 16:28:03 · answer #10 · answered by Justsyd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋