i'm writing a poem for my homework and its about a homage to my eyes
here is my poem....
These eyes are untouchable
Thin as the string
try to go beyond
the obstacles
but it was denied
Brown eyes with oval shaped?!!
No! No! No!
String shaped
These eyes are cring
for the blindness
gets angry
I try to
rip and roll
My clingy eyes
try to make it wider in width
and Length
But it was also denied
can you fix it for me plz thank you
2006-09-24 12:13:22 · 2 answers · asked by Chae-hee S 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
If I fixed it then it wouldn't be your poem anymore, would it? But I would suggest you do a spell check before submitting it. Good luck!
2006-09-24 12:21:56 · answer #1 · answered by rockdeboat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
shape, not shaped
crying, not cring
2006-09-24 12:21:53 · answer #2 · answered by banjuja58 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋