i am writing a comic and i dont want to give to much away for copyright reasons but which beginning is better?
A dog fetches the paper for its owner, and in the last panel, a man in a tunic flys over its head with a bunch of mystical warriors flying after him...
OR
the paper boy is delivering a letter and it opens and there is a alive fish inside that smart talks lol.
I kno this isnt much to work with but i need to kno, and also it doesnt matter which one you pic, the dog and the tunic man will blth be in the comic at some point. i just cant decide how to start it off!
another favor? Any ideas for a title? thanks!
2006-09-24 10:45:15 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
I`m not a writer,
but I would go with the dog first.
paper boy with a fish..??
It`s too soon 4 title
2006-09-24 14:41:47 · answer #1 · answered by sandolina 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think the dog fetching the paper scene works better to catch the readers interest. the first page known as the splash page should always be visually striking. the fish thing is interesting but only intellectually.
2006-09-24 10:56:14 · answer #2 · answered by gorg515 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The 2nd.!
2006-09-24 14:24:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would go with your second choice
2006-09-24 13:28:14 · answer #4 · answered by Jubei 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋