......and be honest.
I really need a way to quit these
BUTTERFLIES
I can't stop the flutter of these
BUTTERFLIES
There's no remedy to cure these
BUTTERFLIES
'Cause________is the maker of my
BUTTERFLIES
I wrote this when I was 10 or 11... and it was written this way too with butterflies on CAPS......! I just found it in my journal and wondered what others would think about it.....!
2006-09-24 09:49:04 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Whoa guys.....did I mention that I wrote this when I was really young....and had no sentimental thoughts at all. Don't worry, this 'poem' (and note that I put it in quotations) does not reflect how I think now......
2006-09-24 10:04:45 · update #1
It might be cute for young girls, but cheesy to older girls
2006-09-24 09:52:21 · answer #1 · answered by *star* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have a rather interesting unique yet not unheard of technique going oh there you say you were a child when this was written then i can only assume as to how great you writting must be by now i personally think this to be quite advanced for one so young
2006-09-24 17:52:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think it is cute. Because no sense of poetry in it.
2006-09-24 16:59:21 · answer #3 · answered by aahamed24 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it means you were an advanced child..hope u are still writing.
2006-09-24 17:23:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ummm NO
2006-09-24 16:53:11 · answer #5 · answered by JO 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aWwwW CUTE !!!Lol I did the same thing when I was younger!!!
2006-09-24 17:02:52 · answer #6 · answered by None 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its sounds good
2006-09-24 17:03:32 · answer #7 · answered by itsme 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋