I love Him
The essence of him
The energy and aura of him
How covertly he enters my soul
How blindly and willingly I submit
Scattered bits and pieces
of brief moments linger with me
Subtle smiles,
twinkling eyes...
an outreached hand..
I walk, sleep and dream of him.
I go through each day with memories of him
like atoms rapidly circling about me
entering my thoughts and
giving way to images of him....
Of the piercing eyes that capture and keep me
in this mindful, lovesick cocoon.
I hold the vision of him in my mind
like a butterfly
that I cannot release
Feeling the desperation of the fragile wings
dusting my brain and winding itself
in the web of memories
holding him...never to be freed
Note: there are 5 more paragraphs but I just wanted to know if anyone understands at least this much of it? Thanks.
2006-09-23 20:21:36 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
It starts out as a fairly normal love story, but the desperation in the last stanza redeems it for me. His image struggles against the prison of your mind, and in doing so only further entangles itself. . . very evocative. I think that the idea of love as obsession (and possession?) is very well-developed here.
I would quibble with your last line; the web of memories seems to me not to hold him but rather his image. The distinction is worthwhile; if you really mean to suggest that trapping the image traps him, you should develop that theme further. It's interesting in itself.
2006-09-24 22:49:34 · answer #1 · answered by Drew 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is very beautiful. I hope that he loves you this much also. If so this could be a very beautiful relationship. Keep up the great writings. You really have a wonderful gift. I enjoyed the feelings of love when I read it. Very sweet of you I hope he realizes and appreciates you as you do him.
God bless you on this journey honey.
2006-09-23 20:28:29 · answer #2 · answered by cinson1999 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
He's A Lucky, Lucky Guy!
Beautifully Written!
2006-09-23 20:23:32 · answer #3 · answered by J. Charles 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i won't be able to fee it, sorry. You did no longer supply me a scale to apply. i will make it easier to be attentive to what I have been given from it, although. I took it as "words", our suggestions, draw photos that become suggestions. previous suggestions are modern suggestions, gentle and difficult again by ability of. I additionally theory it examine properly in sound. Did you propose for "delicacy" to be singular nevertheless? And yeah, it desires a call.
2016-10-17 21:08:30 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem
2006-09-23 20:25:17 · answer #5 · answered by Sydney 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Someone that has passed on or possibly moved away from you and his imagine of him is hard NOT to for get about him..
2006-09-23 20:25:10 · answer #6 · answered by Angus. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its nice ur a creative person
2006-09-23 20:23:46 · answer #7 · answered by its me 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
whats about the web,butterfly and cacoon?
it makes me bored....
so just keep it your self.....its killing me...
dont show it to the internet again....
but it amazes me.... if you did that one...
2006-09-23 20:32:59 · answer #8 · answered by Eunice 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Damn why nobody loves me
2006-09-23 20:31:50 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it.
2006-09-23 20:31:56 · answer #10 · answered by ♥kazzalou♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋