He grabbed me around my slender neck
I could not call or scream.
He dragged me to my dingy room
where we could not be seen.
He tore away my flimsy wrap
and gazed upon my form.
I was so cold and damp and scared
while he was dry and warm.
He pressed his feverish lips to mine
I could not make him stop.
He drained me of my inner self
I gave him every drop.
Then he cast me from his side
so now you see me here.
An empty bottle thrown away
that once was full of beer.
What do you think? Dizzay has twisted my mind...
2006-09-23 04:43:01 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Cute.
2006-09-24 12:49:47 · answer #1 · answered by Drew 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bottled beer is what you say,
Then he was an old man,
For if he'd been a youth or boy,
Of course he'd have a can.
Excellent. I will give you 8/10 Eric G, well done...........
2006-09-23 04:59:37 · answer #2 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kind of freaked me out at first but then I saw what you were talking about.
Good thinking, keeping the readers guessing.
2006-09-23 04:48:43 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
HA HA!
That is funny
2006-09-23 07:49:34 · answer #4 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOL I love it
2006-09-23 04:44:15 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋