I wrote them. It's called By Your Side Forever:
Will you be there/ when danger comes/oh rescue me please. Can't I be the one who's safe/ if i focus/on my energy
Are you driving/in your car to/my house/please come out/i can't afford to lose anyone again
CHORUS: Will you be/at my wedding/will you be/at my funeral/will you be/by my side forever, forever
Will you be there/ when danger comes/will you be my best friend/ what happens/in the end/ is up to God, up to God.
I will be/ right at your side/ do not hide/do not fear/cuz' I am here/ (with you) forever more
2006-09-23 04:12:09 · 6 answers · asked by skateboarder289 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
its ok.. you might want to make it longer...oh yeah, and I agree, the funeraly part is sorta weird ....so ya might wanna change it to something else........
2006-09-23 04:21:34 · answer #1 · answered by ♥beautiful 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good except 4 will u be at my funeral part, kind of weird.
2006-09-23 11:15:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
As soon as you listen to your song with music, you will see that it sounds kind of confused
2006-09-23 11:19:52 · answer #3 · answered by Tracy :) 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think there is a word to describe them. Appalling certainly isn't good enough.
2006-09-23 11:55:21 · answer #4 · answered by Essex Ron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it doesnt seem to make sense each paragraph seems to be about something else! but if thats what ur aiming for then its great!!
2006-09-23 11:27:37 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good, but work on the natural flow some more
2006-09-23 11:19:56 · answer #6 · answered by book_worm308 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋