I lost my best friend and God mother to my daughters 3 yrs ago so i wrote this poem what do you think of it?
What is making me feel so angry again, why am i crying for something so much, it is hurting i dont like this feeling that i have inside of me. I'm missing something in my life and it will never be replaced i know, but is there no way i can be away from this sadness, this loss i so grieve. Why did you take her away from me when she was so important to me, my friend, has gone, gone forever and she will never come back to me. I dream of her, its like shes here, but when i wake i cry as she is not near.
I want to hear her laughter, her kind tender words, but instead there is a silence and nothing to be heard. Goodbye my friend rest in peace, you will be in my mind always and forever, i love you.
2006-09-22 20:53:00 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I Like it.. Anything that let's you find an outlet is good for me.. I know it hurts,and some of us haven't lost someone ,but I know how it feels.. I write poetry too..I hope you find peace... Stay sweet...God Bless..
2006-09-22 21:04:15 · answer #1 · answered by blueboyswoman 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its a very good and thoughtful poem. Looks like u really loved ur friend, her passing away has made u put ur feelings in a poetic way.
2006-09-22 21:02:26 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
its very touching... it gives a sad feeling.. the words fit together so perfectly.. they say, when u turn ur grief into words.. it makes the most beautiful poetry..
2006-09-22 21:03:14 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
answering one of ure old questions, that i had open in a window
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my friend is with these ppl , shes being in various vouges, and tatler..
2006-09-23 04:24:58 · answer #4 · answered by yeah well 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
beautiful tribute.
what happiness she would want for you. not to be angry, but to accept life is so precious. thank you for your love, don't keep it anymore, share it, there are so many who need it.
2006-09-22 21:01:02 · answer #5 · answered by sllyjo 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
it's very sad, heartbreaking, but beautiful :)
2006-09-22 21:02:31 · answer #6 · answered by IslandAngel64 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
very creative and touching
2006-09-23 03:35:19 · answer #7 · answered by Jubei 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
it made my eyes well up
2006-09-22 21:06:29 · answer #8 · answered by Quickfix008(∞Cicci∞) 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋