I lost my best friend and God mother to my daughters 3 yrs ago so i wrote this poem what do you think of it?
What is making me feel so angry again, why am i crying for something so much, it is hurting i dont like this feeling that i have inside of me. I'm missing something in my life and it will never be replaced i know, but is there no way i can be away from this sadness, this loss i so grieve. Why did you take her away from me when she was so important to me, my friend, has gone, gone forever and she will never come back to me. I dream of her, its like shes here, but when i wake i cry as she is not near.
I want to hear her laughter, her kind tender words, but instead there is a silence and nothing to be heard. Goodbye my friend rest in peace, you will be in my mind always and forever, i love you.
2006-09-22 20:52:19 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think it's a lovely way to remember your friend. It is terrible to lose those we love. I hope that you have lots of photos and strong memories of fun times you had together. Tell your daughters stories and it will keep the memories with you.
2006-09-22 21:09:47 · answer #1 · answered by Susan M 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
These are very poignant words, and like many I can relate to the loss you're experiencing. However, although prose it's not a poem. May I suggest you compose a tribute based upon all the good and positive things you experienced from having her as a friend? I believe that it would be a fitting epitaph to one so loved.
2006-09-22 21:04:01 · answer #2 · answered by JENNY G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry about your loss. Still, it's not much of a poem, just a dear diary entry. Sorry.
2006-09-22 20:58:53 · answer #3 · answered by justdennis 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋