I wrote a short poem a few years ago. I was trying to describe the winter scene I saw out my window. But I was also trying to say something about loss and new beginnings.
After you read it, please tell me....
a. Is it any good at all?
b. Where do I go with it now (I kinda got stuck at the end)
Here is the poem I wrote on a snowy winter day.
In the distance, snow covered trees mourn the loss of their leaves.
In stark contrast to the pale blanket which surrounds them they stand, silently yearning for the time when they may begin again.
I'm not sure where to go from here, and although I know what I am trying to say, the last part of the last line is kind of vague.
2006-09-22
17:43:13
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