Carry Me Away
Take a look but not for to long cause I wont be here forever, I need your kiss to survive so wont you give me one and let me live? Are things always gonna be this way of two way love and nothing more its your look in your eyes that makes me break.
So baby come pick me up, pick me up and carry me away.
I hope soon ill wake up and realize how to play this game so I can win and leave this feeling far behind. Cause it pierces my hear and makes me bleed, no surgery can save me just the love from you so waiting is where ill be cause I cant move so oh wont you take pity and set me free?
So baby come pick me up, pick me up and carry me away.
Im falling im falling to pieces, everythings spinning out of control my world is tumbling down. Im running so fast just to keep up but somehow I fall short this worlds too big and im to small.
So baby come pick me up, pick me up and carry me away.
Ive given up on this world and everyone inside. Its all a hopeless cause to wish its all a heartbreak im just a heartbreak, no way to make me crumble anymore cause im at the smallest pieces possible. So dont bother to save me, just leave me down.
No need to pick me up, and to carry me away
2006-09-22 09:02:48 · 4 answers · asked by raynay122000 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i guess it's decent. but if you got and idea stick do it. don't just say carry me than say don't carry me. it's sorta dropping the end. i would take this a three and a half star poem.
2006-09-22 09:07:07 · answer #1 · answered by Laela 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's hard to say without hearing the melody, but the lyrics definitely have potential.
But I wouldn't suggest posting freely like you just did because anybody can steal it...Be more careful...
2006-09-22 09:10:41 · answer #2 · answered by LadyMagick 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow and you wrote that? Gives meaning to peoples lives
2006-09-22 09:29:52 · answer #3 · answered by kellyhalkyard 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the words are real touching and meaningful,it's good
2006-09-22 09:16:25 · answer #4 · answered by BeGood. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋