How would you start off with describing your dream vacation? or describe your dream vacation.
2006-09-22 03:18:30 · 6 answers · asked by jbird3351 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Do it as if you are telling a story...
As we stepped off the plane, there were greeters giving people leihs...
Just an idea. Have fun with it though.
2006-09-22 03:26:57 · answer #1 · answered by Steph 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Example:
For a vacation to be my "dream vacation" it would have several qualities such as great geography, fun activities, and terrific weather.
I would love a vacation in Hawaii because learning to surf has long been a dream of mine. Besides having some of the world's most amazing waves, it has other excellent geographic features, such as volcanoes one can explore and hot springs one can relax in. Geography isn't the only important aspect of a great vaction. Fun activities are important too.
In Hawaii, one can scuba dive, sail, swim, or do nothing but relax on the warm, breezy beach.
That is one example. Check out some vacation packages offered on line. See what things attract your attention and make you want to go there. Then Begin your essay by listing the top 3 or five things. Follow up with each of the next three paragraphs backing those statements up, then conclude. That's all there is to it. Best of luck! Hope you get an A!
2006-09-22 10:31:40 · answer #2 · answered by whereRyou? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
open the scene abruptly.
like:
i would get the flight to heaven........
and after it start describing the situation around you. this is a tool used in great english drama and poems. this is called"in medias res"
this would impress the readers very much.
even if you do not have any clear idea of the topic . just describe the vague idea you've got. that is enough. never explain anything thing too much. always keep on switching scene's.
still if you have problems
visit any essay site.
search using google or yahoo for an essay site and after entering an essay site you could search for your topic.
hope you're satisfied.
2006-09-22 10:31:34 · answer #3 · answered by vaidhee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1st make a list of the things that would make it a 'dream vacation'. Put into organized parts. For example, My dream vacation:
Where: Scotland
Why: See the land of my ancestors and all the beautiful sights there.
Who: I would want my kids, parents, and brother along.
What we would do: Visit Culleodon, see all the old castles, try to catch Nessy, eat haggis, buy kilts, go fishing,
how long: A couple of months, to really get an idea of what the land and its people really are like.
Take: Camera, video, backpack for hiking,
2006-09-22 10:29:10 · answer #4 · answered by Charles B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmm lets see, The greatest time I had was when we...etc
Or
One of the most memorable time i had was when we went on... etc
or the unconventional way
Have you ever wondered whats bliss like, i experienced it when i went on.... etc
2006-09-22 10:28:06 · answer #5 · answered by R R 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dream the dream...then tell what you dreamed...
2006-09-22 10:28:36 · answer #6 · answered by fred[because i can] 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋