can anyone help me to revise those please??
1.In the not too distant future, I intend to carry Kleenex with me at all times in the event of a runny nose. I have had a runny nose on a great number of instances, which is unattractive in appearance.
Marcus ate each and every one of the carrots due to the fact that he was extremely hungry and was of the opinion that carrots would help him gain night vision.
2006-09-22 00:04:00 · 8 answers · asked by ME 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
1. In the not too distant future, I intend to carry Kleenex with me at all times, in the event of a runny nose. I have had a runny nose on a great number of instances, which is unattractive in appearance.
Marcus was of the opinion that carrots would help him gain night vision. Moreover, he ate each and every one of the carrots due to the fact that he was extremely hungry.
2006-09-22 00:22:43 · answer #1 · answered by magnamamma 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In the not too distant future, I intend to carry a Kleenex with me all the time for use in the event of a running nose. I have had running nose at a great number of instances, which is unattractive in appearance.
Marcus ate each and every carrot bcoz of the fact that he was extremely hungry and was of the opinion that carrots would help him gain night vision
i'm not sure if i'm rite.. u confused me budds..
according to me, da sentences r not in correct language n shud hav been:
1. very soon, i'll start carrying a Kleenex with me all the time for saving me from a running nose.. i have had a running nose many a times earlier and its very messy.
2. Marcus ate all the carrots as he was hungry and had the opinion that carrots help gain night vision.
2006-09-22 00:06:20 · answer #2 · answered by da_self 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. Since I have had previous unattractive bouts of rhinorrhea (runny nose), I plan on carrying kleenex with me in the future to prevent any embarrassment.
2. Marcus ate every carrot since he was extremely hungry and thought that it would improve his night vision.
2006-09-22 00:17:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1) I get a runny nose quite often, which is unattractive in appearence. In the future I intend to carry Kleenex with me, if such an event should occur.
2) Marcus was hungry and ate all the carrots served him, and because he belived that carrots would help him improve his night vision.
2006-09-22 00:11:03 · answer #4 · answered by WC 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2006-09-22 20:23:16 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although there are differences that I would make, there is essentially nothing wrong with what you have written - in fact, you have a better control over the English language than most people on Y!Answers!
Rawlyn.
2006-09-22 00:13:05 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds all right to me. Do you have microsoft Word? If you want to check your grammer/spelling just type your sentences in there and then click the spell checker button.
2006-09-22 00:10:34 · answer #7 · answered by sunsetigerlily 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It appears to be correct already, short of lacking the double spacing after the periods.
2006-09-22 00:13:28 · answer #8 · answered by Blankito 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋