I am a little alien
I come from far away
I miss my planet very much
But here I have to stay
I got a job at K-mart
And they look at me quite funny
I'm good at what I do
But only in it for the money
And when I finish work at night
I sadly wander home
I shed a little tear, and then
I say this little poem
2006-09-21 13:43:11 · 9 answers · asked by Dr Know It All 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
i would give it a 8 out of a 10
2006-09-21 13:48:24 · answer #1 · answered by TWINKLETOES 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quirky enough for a 6 and a half on a one to ten scale.
no #7
this alien sounds quite human.
2006-09-21 20:46:53 · answer #2 · answered by Grev 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
are you speaking from personal experience???
sorry,was joking
i give it a 7 on 1-10 scale,very entertaining
2006-09-21 21:05:39 · answer #3 · answered by tinaluvsglass 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A 7.3 out of 10.
Overall, pretty good and kinda funny.
2006-09-21 20:45:24 · answer #4 · answered by Tiny Dancer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cool for a 6th or 7th grader, needs more substance. 7/10.
2006-09-21 21:06:51 · answer #5 · answered by Eryc 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd rate the poem as not very positive and optimism-reinforcing.
2006-09-21 20:56:31 · answer #6 · answered by pre-pastor 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very cute.
2006-09-21 20:45:43 · answer #7 · answered by Sirius Black 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good Job!!!!!
I think that it is very cute & funny
2006-09-22 12:04:17 · answer #8 · answered by bigred 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
6.5
2006-09-21 21:09:18 · answer #9 · answered by doggybag300 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋