it is i romeo
you fill my life with brightness like the sun
everytime you speak is like a angel singing a peaceful song
you shine brighter than any other star in the night sky
you are a crimson rose in a field of white roses
you twinkle like glitter falling slowly catching the light
2006-09-21 00:07:56 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Not bad. Lots of similes, however. Anytime you use the articles "a, an" in a sentence, if the word that follows the article has a vowel sound (not necessarily a vowel letter) you use the article "an," (everytime you speak is like AN angel singing....) and if the word following the article has a consonant sound, you would use the article "a." You will want to add commas and capital letters in the appropriate places. Hope this helps.
2006-09-21 00:18:13 · answer #1 · answered by Kenny L 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are in LOVE. I think that whoever this is meant for will be filled with delight at the splendour of your words. What a precious gift of loveliness you have. Share it with the person intended.
2006-09-21 00:11:57 · answer #2 · answered by holistic_service 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sure i suppose, what is it for?
2006-09-21 00:11:45 · answer #3 · answered by Dawn C 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋