If you change the background and the colour behind the text to a darker spookier shade then it would be allright.
2006-09-21 00:24:44
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answered by Anonymous
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I think your site is pretty good. I'm not too fond of the hot pink, but your customer base may really like it. I'm afraid I had to do some reading before understanding the products being sold. I felt like I was reading a blog instead of a marketing site. Maybe consider being less wordy on the home page and add a link that allows the visitor to select "About Pixie" and there you could give all the background you'd like. On the home page use dramatic phasing to get your products across. Or select certain items and add them to the home page with distinct lettering and phrases. You have some on the far right side, but really I thought that was an advertisement for something else.
Lastly, be aware of your grammar. If you would like to be taken seriously, then be sure to capitalize, etc as appropriate. Lack of good grammar will decrease your credibility.
Good luck and I hope you make it big.
2006-09-21 06:54:26
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answered by hvnmorefun 3
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Well, personally, I think you've made a nice site, but it should be a little more improoved. Probably in the way of fashion and decorating of the site. What I like your web site is perhaps you've got quite a lot of things to choose. Also, the prize is not too hard so that can make more people unhasitate to purchase it. Overall, it's a good website, which I appriciate it quite a lot.
2006-09-21 06:53:44
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answered by little bee 2
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i thinks its pretty good. the background doesnt tile right, but thats no big deal. also, im not a big fan of black background sites. i would go with dark gray or something, but thats just me. other than those little nothings ied say its a very good site.
2006-09-21 06:50:30
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answered by cyrus_xi 5
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hi
hope u r fine
your site is nice
i wish u all the best but do u know something i didnt love all the graphics some of them are scary...
but its nice the colors,the styles and every thing..
2006-09-21 06:58:02
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answered by blue rose 2
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dear friend,
change the dark pink background
have some light lemon colour sort
the colours should be pleasing and fresh.
hve gr8 day
raj
2006-09-21 06:49:27
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answered by dreamsunltd 3
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you should change the background image. don't tile it because it is not big or small enough to tile correctly.
choose "repeat:no" or choose a tile of 20x20px image
2006-09-21 06:48:38
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answered by applejuice 2
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Hi, I like your website except for that shoking pink background, go for a softer colour. By the way you've inspired me, thanks.
2006-09-21 08:40:21
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answered by dec fav 2
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could do with some refinements
2006-09-22 10:33:58
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answered by Anonymous
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cute, i really like your belt ideas....and your t shirts look cute too!
2006-09-21 06:52:44
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answered by Anonymous
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