The Blade of Justice
The blade of justice has power and might
It rips through terror and through fright
no type of armor can shield its light
darkness quivers in its sight
please rate on a scale of 1-10
and if you want tell me how i can improve
2006-09-20 18:19:16 · 5 answers · asked by ? 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
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2006-09-20 22:41:04 · answer #1 · answered by Anry 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
This is probably about a 3. You need to read more. That cereal box just ain't enough. People who are truly good at their craft spend years studying the works of others.
2006-09-21 01:38:50 · answer #2 · answered by Sam 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it was really a product of your mind than 8...
You're just 15 and I'm sure you can improve a lot... may be you're the next Shakespeare.
2006-09-21 05:59:40 · answer #3 · answered by Ω Nookey™ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
8 You might want to be more concrete - you have great metaphors, but I feel like this could tell more of a story.
2006-09-21 01:35:44 · answer #4 · answered by puma 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8.75
2006-09-21 01:32:36 · answer #5 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋