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++Poem Contest

I will be giving maybe 3 days to do this or, longer or shorter. Whatever one is better for me.

Information
++I do not want any 3-10 line Poems, i want real poems that real people make, you make it. I"ll post it on my forum with your name, giving your credit, so you don't feel like i stole it or anything, and i don't feel guilty.
++Poems need to be at least 3 stanza long
++At least 3 lines per stanza
++At least 4 words per sentence, line
++Post your name

Thanks

I will be posting the best ones onto my forum, goodluck!

2006-09-20 12:49:47 · 3 answers · asked by Xiao 3 in Entertainment & Music Other - Entertainment

3 answers

I guess I will be the first. Enjoy.

Dark Mortal Sphere

Dark, dismal, dreary void
Yet filled with shapeless forms
This place of essence destroyed
By the fallen beings’ storms.

Here in darkness gathered
(Those whom joy pervades
Those with dreams shattered)
The numerous fallen shades.

The kindred spirits lacking
Reasons for existence
Show this – only by making
A sad, uncertain countenance.

With random motions they wander
Around the vast emptiness.
Without reason they meander
As their cares digress.

What is this foreign place?
Who are the shapeless things?
It is the Earth without grace
With the shapeless – human beings.

I know that there is only three words in the second line of the second stanza. Syllables are where my count lies, not words.

As for my name, it remains SilenceHeldStill.

2006-09-21 21:01:06 · answer #1 · answered by silenceheldstill 2 · 0 1

Roses are red
Violets are Blue
Get A Life!

2006-09-20 19:53:29 · answer #2 · answered by Zanessa 2 · 1 0

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2006-09-22 03:14:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

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