What does this mean to you? I wrote this poem on a plain (no snakes, Yea!!!) this morning going to see one of my sisters. Thing is, I have no idea what it means.
"When the rain is coming down all around me,
I won't cry myself to sleep.
I will live life for the moment,
And never again be weak.
Run free through the medow,
And now it won't be long.
The rain is coming down again,
But I continue with my song.
I feel the thunder rumble,
deep inside my heart.
And I can't help but to wonder,
If maybe I'm a part.
Do these cloudes know what I'm feeling?
They seen to cry the tears that I can't.
And as much as I tried,
I can never forget.
What you've done to me,
And how you've wronged my broken heart.
And you're no longer here now,
So I thank God we're apart.
The rain keeps coming down now,
And rolling down my head.
I can see you in the fog,
And I feel a since of dread.
It's not really you though,
'Cause you're gone so far away
Because of what you did to me,
2006-09-20 12:03:32 · 6 answers · asked by ariel 2 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
And I hope that there you'll stay. When the rain coming down all around me,
I won't cry myself to sleep.
I will live life for the moment, And never again be weak. You'll never take my life away, Try as you may. BecauseI live life for the moment And I take every day."
Sorry for any type-o's, My spell check is retarded. anyways, this is called "RAIN" and I want to know what you think is happening. Please just help me out a little. I have to turn this in for my Creative Writeing project.
Please, and Thank You!!!
2006-09-20 12:03:53 · update #1
ummm..... Just FYI, no, this has NOTHING to do with my Father. Or any one else. It's just a poem!
Oh, BTW I had a great father. he never did anything to any one. Ewww...
2006-09-20 12:35:18 · update #2
WOW!!!! I sorry to say this, but it makes me think that someone may have hurt you. But no matter what, you'll move on and NEVER let anything keep you down.
2006-09-20 12:19:52 · answer #1 · answered by ~Forever~ 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful poem!!!
You've been hurt by someone and going through the emotional rollercoaster. Starting out as being strong and then goes in to sadness again. Then goes back and forth; like a struggle to stay strong even though you are still sad.
I totally love it!
2006-09-20 12:34:28 · answer #2 · answered by sammie 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
To me it means someone hurt you either by dying or breaking your heart but no matter what they did you are going to move on and not let it keep you down! Whatever it means it sounds good.
2006-09-20 12:15:22 · answer #3 · answered by awesome_chick2009 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It seems you have been bothered by someone close to you, such as a father maybe, what he did was enough to throw him in jail. I can't say much more on behalf of the way you feel, obviously devistated so I will not dig deeper into this
2006-09-20 12:17:40 · answer #4 · answered by Aaron4me 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think it means that somebody has broken your heart and you are telling them that you are not going to be kept down and cry about it. You are going to be strong and move on. It was very good.
2006-09-20 12:16:22 · answer #5 · answered by mommysrock 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its really great. it will mean something different to everyone. but its really good
2006-09-20 17:28:09 · answer #6 · answered by jordanthegrouch 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋