You are my Dream
You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
I would like to talk with any girl my age (13-16) who likes my poem
2006-09-20 03:47:19 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That is very sweet, but it is far better to find something and love it than try to find something you love.
2006-09-20 03:51:43 · answer #1 · answered by connie_mspt 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow.....thats beautiful.....ive got goose pimples.did u write it?its the best poem ive read in yahoo answers.woooow(a million times)u seem 2 be desperate.i read all ur questions!if ur still doing ur schooling ,ur THE best.any girl would be flattered 4 such a poem.all the best!
2006-09-20 10:57:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you're still at school,this is really good. Come to think of it, it's really good for an adult. Keep it up,you little romantic you ! I think you'll be getting older girls wanting to talk to you
2006-09-20 10:54:28 · answer #3 · answered by Taylor29 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats sweet. sorry I am way over that age limit but good luck =))
2006-09-20 10:49:47 · answer #4 · answered by Happi @ss 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
so sweet dear, but in the real wrld, ul need more than poetry
2006-09-20 10:53:31 · answer #5 · answered by titties 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really sweet.. im 15
2006-09-20 10:50:50 · answer #6 · answered by sexyrockgurl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey funhsguy, haven't had any luck with that as yet, huh. just hang in there one would turn up.
2006-09-20 10:51:34 · answer #7 · answered by katz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sixteen and i love your poem.
2006-09-20 10:50:29 · answer #8 · answered by krystyna_long 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww bless,that is soo sweet :) -x-
2006-09-20 10:50:31 · answer #9 · answered by kez_124 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋