Fast Quick and easy ok??
What Poem sounds interesting to you ?
" Lost "
AT the touch of the wind i flee away with a whisper
Throughout the hemisphere I see fairies ith crinkled wings that have been warn out
In the sky I see an arrow making its way throught the earth
I feel the heavily racing wind going through my hair
I see a kid playing
Where Am I ?
In Tokyo
" cRYStals "
Ocean breeze
cool water
yellow moon
cold night
walking talking and happiness
we all see how the ocean works but do we see what's inside the ocean?
sea creatures
plants
AND,
CRYSTALS THAT SHINE THROUGH THE GLORIESS LIGHT.
Ok, I wrote these two poems by heart and Im only 11 YEARS Old and like , are these good poems for a 11 year old??
2006-09-19 10:33:12 · 6 answers · asked by hello 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Really good job! Keep writing. I think you're on to something : )
2006-09-19 10:41:55 · answer #1 · answered by clarity 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
These are really good - I like the first one quite a bit. Impressive that you're only 11! Keep on writing!
2006-09-19 17:42:32 · answer #2 · answered by jennyc 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Those are wonderful. Anytime you do something creative it is a good thing. Keep writing.
2006-09-19 17:39:52 · answer #3 · answered by al p 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW 11 year old Girl i am in amazing. NICE work!!!!!!! I LOVE IT. I will give you a A+++++++.
2006-09-19 17:35:39 · answer #4 · answered by BENDER IS THE BOMB!!! (Fav show) 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes they are good. Now keep writing more.
2006-09-19 17:40:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jesus does NOT rock, ok??!?!?
2006-09-19 17:36:44 · answer #6 · answered by nerveserver 5 · 0⤊ 3⤋