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Question

3 levels of development

There were not always three levels of economic development. At one time it was divided into the Eastern bloc and the Western bloc. After World War II, people started using the terms "First World" and "Second World", but with so many gray areas another designation was needed. In the 1950's the specification of "Third World" was added. Even now, with so many countries that lie somewhere in the middle, these are the three levels still in use.

The “First World” countries are the countries that are the most industrialized. This would include a GDP per capita greater than $15,000, or higher. There are fewer “First World” countries as compared to “Second World”, due to the higher requirements needed referred to as a “First World” country. First world countries are in North America, Western Europe, Japan, Australia, and New Zealand.

Second World” countries include all of the countries lying in the middle. It was not always common for people to refer to the nations within the Soviet Union’s sphere as “Second World”. Beside the Soviet Union, satellite governments working closely with Moscow ran most of Eastern Europe. The “Second World” may or may not also refer to the Communist countries whose leadership was at odds with Moscow. The “Second World is defined of having developed planned economies

The “Third World” is a term first made up in 1952 by a French demographer, Alfred Sauvy. “Third World” later became a synonym of these nations that aligned themselves with neither the West nor the Soviet Bloc during the Cold War. So the Non-Aligned Movement was created after the 1955 Bandung Conference. But today the term is frequently used to denote nation with low (HDI). The term Global South, less wealthy nations, developing countries, least developed countries and the Majority World have become more popular where the term “third world” is to be out of date

There have not always been three levels of economic development. At one time the world was divided into two bloc’s the Eastern and the Western. After World War II people used the terms “First” and “Second” Worlds, but with a lot of countries falling somewhere in the middle another term was needed. Later on the “Third World” was added to the other two. Now even with the three world classifications, some countries still lie somewhere in the middle.

i'm in 9th grade

Answer 1

your paper makes very little sense. for example, you say there are still countries in the middle... but with three designations there IS a middle. were you trying to say that there should be more designations? you still have no obvious thesis or topic sentence.

look... say something with your paper. don't just write garbage until it looks long enough... read it to see if it makes sense and proves a point. that is the purpose of writing.

Answer 2

Scarlett had some good suggestions and yes, you do need a topic sentence. Your revised opening paragraph has some flaws (the apostrophe in "bloc's", for instance, and though I can't see it here, there was a comma problem as well. And that sentence about "so many countries that lie somewhere in the middle" is puzzling. You do have a middle, don't you? The "Second World" countries?

Well organized and mechanically sound. Good job!

Answer 3

Very good. But when you use acronyms like GDP, you should spell out what they stands for the first time you use it.
EX: This would include a GDP (Gross Domestic Product) per capita greater than ..

You need to do the same for HDI. I don't know what HDI stands for exactly so you need to tell me, the reader.

Answer 4

Sure, not bad, but there are also countries that lie way at the bottom and we refer to them as fourth rate. Mostly these countries are in Africa and the middle east. New York is in danger of falling into fourth rate categories if it hasn't already.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

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Answer 7

To be honest, I'm very impressed. Very well researched and presented. I learned some facts I wasn't to sure about from it. Well done.

Answer 8

you need a topic sentence somwhere in your first paragraph. remember a topic sentence is the topic+verb+characteristics. if you dont have a topic sentence then it's not a proper essay. otherwise good job.

Answer 9

Very well done! Very informative!

Answer 10

it looks great. what grade are you in? hope you get a good grade.