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so heres my short story so far.......

"ah ha" said captian buttsecks "we have arrived in the land of cabrakuba". The boat finally floated on the land of cabrakuba. As the captian and his crew got on land a wild turkey suddenly attacked one of the crew members. The end.

2006-09-19 07:23:36 · 8 answers · asked by seeseezsee 2 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

8 answers

Second episode:
The captain screamed "freeze" He hasn't a gun to protect his crew member. The turkey stopped and in seconds it became a beautiful ice sculpture!
"What in the Hell" said captain. Suddenly from everywhere daemons come, fires light on, the sky became black and red, smokes and hot, black and red everywhere...
"Captain" said Thomas, the cooker, "be care full, when you say a word that's become reality"
"Paradise" said captain and plants start growing, flowers, birds and butterflies came, rainbows start dancing in a blue sky, blue waters, white sand beaches appears...The end

2006-09-19 07:36:22 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 0 0

You can not say so far and then put the end at the end. If you really want to write a story be a little more original and get a bigger imagination.

2006-09-19 07:32:44 · answer #2 · answered by lost_soul 4 · 0 0

is short. sounds like you are drinking Captian Morgan and Wild Turkey.....could be where your ideas are coming from.

2006-09-19 07:30:06 · answer #3 · answered by melissa 6 · 0 0

i think u have a long way to go before anyone else can land on ur dream island

2006-09-19 07:31:37 · answer #4 · answered by vick 5 · 0 0

i don't see how that is a question but its pretty funny to me. And i love the captains name. that's hilarious

2006-09-19 07:26:52 · answer #5 · answered by Scooterpoot 2 · 0 0

What do I think of what? There is nothing thought provoking here.

2006-09-19 07:30:18 · answer #6 · answered by Shyguy 3 · 0 0

Sounds all right.

2006-09-19 07:27:24 · answer #7 · answered by Avner Eliyahu R 6 · 0 0

kinda lame.

2006-09-19 07:26:28 · answer #8 · answered by themysterious 3 · 0 0

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