You are my Dream
You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
I would like to talk with any girl my age (13-16) who likes my poem
2006-09-19 04:41:39 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
oh...how nice...im 14
2006-09-19 04:43:50 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You would like to talk to a girl of your age...? So are you 13, 14, 15, 16 or possibly 'other'?
How many times are you going to post the same question, and why do you pretend to be in a boy band? Hmmmm, do we have an odd ball, or just a desperado, in our midst?...
2006-09-19 11:48:55 · answer #2 · answered by CC...x 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is really good; my advice to you is to never give up on this talent you have. However, I am definately not 13-16yrs, what I wouldn't give to be 19 again, though......lol
Good Luck!
2006-09-19 11:52:19 · answer #3 · answered by dyingatwork 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not aged 13-16...but I liked your poem...very nice~
2006-09-19 11:43:58 · answer #4 · answered by itty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm a little older than you requested (19) but I like it. On "Like your sent from above" should be "you're" but otherwise, good job!!
2006-09-19 11:47:47 · answer #5 · answered by question 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem...emotional... :-p but im 26!! 10 yrs older than u expect...lol..best of luck for ur search sweets!
2006-09-19 11:48:03 · answer #6 · answered by samira_04 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poetry. I write poetry too. I take it you wrote it?I'm 13
2006-09-19 11:49:18 · answer #7 · answered by BeautifulDevil 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was beautiful, but i'm too old for you sweety!
2006-09-19 11:44:06 · answer #8 · answered by DrPepper 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice way of FLIRTING................
who knows whether u wrote it or u copied it from sm gud poet???????
do u live in a place where there r no girls???
2006-09-19 11:49:40 · answer #9 · answered by priya t 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude your such a young f-a-g
2006-09-19 11:52:47 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋