In "Alter Egos",they show Ryan’s reaction to his first viewing of this short film of Ryan’s descent after he disappeared from the filmmaking industry.In the conversation between Chris and Ryan,he is not satisfied with the way the animation made his appearance look.Although Ryan’s image in this short was negative yet truthful, he refuses to take this image as himself.He does not seem to care for change or consider returning to the filmmaking business where he left off.As he describe his methods of panhandling,he seems to enjoy living tax free and(need to add in here that means he doesn’t care that hes on the street and he can get on with his life well). Both Chris and Ryan have the same persona, but way different paths.Ryan has been down the same path that Chris is on now,but the end result of him giving up on animation, lead him to where he is now. He saw what he became and what he missed out on in the life through the animation. When viewing his own art, he sees the whole picture and all that he has built.
2006-09-18 19:18:49 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
i have taken all the double spaces after periods and single spaces after commas, to fit the whole paragraph in the box, cause of the limit of characters i can work with.
2006-09-18 19:26:20 · update #1
In "Alter Egos",we see Ryan's reaction to the viewing of this short film. The film shows Ryan’s descent after disappearing from the filmmaking industry. When discussing the film with Chris, Ryan voices his dissatifcation with the way the animation potrays him.Although Ryan’s image in the film was negative, it is so very accurate,but Ryan refuses to accept this fact. Ryan has no intention of changing his behavior and has no intention of returning to the filmmaking industry. As Ryan describes his methods of panhandling, we see how he seems to enjoy living tax free and sees no need to return to his previous career. Both Chris and Ryan have the same persona, but are on different paths.Ryan has been where Chris is ,but he gave up on his career an has gone down a very different path. After viewing the film he has seen the path his life has taken and has seen was he has missed out on in life.
+++I can't put the changes in caps...i deleted stuff and rewrote it...some stuff didn't even make sense when you read it++++ Hope this helps.
2006-09-18 19:41:10 · answer #1 · answered by angeliquedesjardins 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This one sounds better than the last, but you need to write and actual ending sentence for it. You have just stopped the paper with no conclusion.
2006-09-18 19:24:05 · answer #2 · answered by Sammy S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you need two spaces after a period for one.... and I charge money for doing proof reading...
2006-09-18 19:22:28 · answer #3 · answered by pro_steering_wheel_holder 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋