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Ryan is an animated version of an interview between Ryan Larkin and Chris Landreth.Chris has taken parts of real interviews between him, Ryan and various other people that knew the Ryan that existed at the peak of his own success,and pieced them together to create this short film. He depicts his fellow film maker’s rise, downfall and what he has become.Back in the 1960s,Ryan Larkin was a rising star of animation and an Oscar nominee who dropped out of the animation film industry and disintegrated by abusing cocaine, alcohol and sold his valuable art to live by.Ryan is shown as a fragile incomplete person,with remains of what was once a face and body shown as broken but not completely destroyed. Both Chris and Ryan had missing and distorted parts of their face,but Ryan’s image was noticeably more ruined and incomplete.But his image grows back temporarily in scenes where Ryan is connecting with his past, like when he was shown his own artwork and talking about Felicity.

Answer 1

Ryan is an animated version of an interview between Ryan Larkin and Chris Landreth.Chris has taken parts of real interviews between himSELF, Ryan, and various other people and pieced them together to create this short film. He depicts his fellow film maker’s rise, downfall, and what he has become.Back in the 1960s,Ryan Larkin was a rising star of animation and an Oscar nominee who dropped out of the animation film industry and disintegrated by abusing cocaine AND alcohol. HE ALSO sold his valuable art to live by.Ryan is shown as a fragile incomplete person,with THE remains of what was once a face and body shown as broken but not completely destroyed. Both Chris and Ryan had missing and distorted parts of their faceS, but Ryan’s image was noticeably more ruined and incomplete.HOWEVER his image grows back temporarily in scenes where Ryan is connecting with his past, SUCH AS when he was shown his own artwork and talking about Felicity.

Answer 2

"Ryan" is an animated version of an interview between Ryan Larkin and Chris Landreth. Chris has taken parts of real interviews between him, Ryan, and various other people that knew the Ryan that existed at the peak of his own success,and pieced them together to create this short film. He depicts his fellow filmmaker’s rise, downfall, and what he has (SINCE or NOW) become. Back in the 1960s, Ryan Larkin was a rising star of animation and an Oscar nominee who dropped out of the animation film industry and disintegrated THROUGH THE ABUSE OF cocaine AND alcohol, SELLING HIS VALUABLE ART TO STAY ALIVE. Ryan is shown as a fragile AND incomplete person, with remains of what was once a face and body, shown as broken but not completely destroyed. Both Chris and Ryan ARE SHOWN missing parts of their face, WITH OTHERS DISTORTED, but Ryan’s image was noticeably more ruined and incomplete (CONSIDER USING ANOTHER WORD HERE - YOU'VE ALREADY USED INCOMPLETE ONCE). HOWEVER, his image grows back temporarily in scenes where Ryan is connecting with his past, like when HE IS SHOWN his own artwork and TALKS about Felicity.

Answer 3

Ryan is an animated version of an interview between Ryan Larkin and Chris Landreth. Chris has taken parts of real interviews between him, Ryan and various other people that knew the Ryan that existed at the peak of his own success, and pieced them together to create this short film. He depicts his fellow FILMMAKER’S rise, FALL and what HAS BECOME OF HIM. Back in the 1960s, Ryan Larkin was a rising star of animation and an Oscar nominee who dropped out of the animation film industry. HE FELL APART by abusing cocaine AND alcohol. TO BE ABLE TO LIVE HE HAD TO SELL his valuable art. Ryan is shown as a fragile BROKEN person, with remains of what was once a face and body (REMOVE) BROKEN but not completely destroyed. Both Chris and Ryan had missing and distorted parts of their face, but Ryan’s image was noticeably more DAMAGED and SPLINTERED. HOWEVER, his image grows back temporarily in SEVERAL scenes WHEN Ryan is connecting with his past. FOR EXAMPLE: when he was shown his own artwork and talking about Felicity.

Answer 4

But his image grows back temporarily in scenes where Ryan is connecting with his past, like when he was shown his own artwork and talking about Felicity.
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