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I feel very depressed right now.
i keep telling myself i think i would be better off alone.
but in the back of my mind i can just see that perfect person holding my hand
telling me that they love me.
and then i snap back to reality and i realize that would never happen.
why cant i find my soul mate?
it it that hard?
or should i give up and say fck the realtionship sht.
and be alone forever.
im not sure.
but what i do know.
if im by myself the i have no one to disappoint me.
or lie to me
or cheat on me
or make me feel even more depressed
no one to argue with.
all i have is myself to depend on.
is it so bad to be alone?

2006-09-18 16:23:31 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

13 answers

The poem was kind of a downer, but I liked it. I can relate to it. As a self-proclaimed loner, I've often struggled with trying to balance my introverted tendencies with an extroverted world. What have I concluded? Well, to answer the question at the end of your poem, it isn't so bad to be alone. I enjoy my own company because I don't have to be encumbered by anyone. But I also recognize that socialization is very important to the construction of the mind and advancement in life, so I don't shirk my social responsibilities and I try to be kind to people. It's a balance that works for me.

2006-09-18 16:35:59 · answer #1 · answered by Subconsciousless 7 · 0 0

You need to stop thinking. It blocks your heart from writing I have found. The lines are to wordy. I know you don't care but this is how i think it should be

I'm feeling depressed.
I may be better of alone.
But there is that one man
Standing in the background
Holding my hand
Saying that he loves me
Reality shows that would never happen.
Why can't I find my soul mate?
Is it really that hard?
Or should I just give up?
And be alone forever.
If I am by myself
there will be no one to disappoint me.
Or make me feel even more depressed.
All I can depend on is myself.
Is it so bad to be alone.


I know I'm not that great but i spend a lot of time writing so i know a little.

2006-09-18 18:50:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I live this everyday, and it's placed well within your poem. The true thing about life is we really could never be alone, but constantly feel it. Do you believe in soul mates? I question that as a possibility. It is a good poem just feels like it needs a better order or a certain climax. The great thing is that people can relate. Good luck and God bless.

2006-09-18 18:15:19 · answer #3 · answered by 4me2no&u2findout 3 · 0 0

For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not inevitably ought to rhyme in spite of if it needs to hit my emotions. i think of readability of expression is substantial to boot. i do no longer want to 2nd wager what i'm analyzing approximately. I constantly seem for what I term "poetic gem stones"interior the textual content cloth.

2016-10-15 03:52:55 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

hi there,as a matter of fact it is very vein in contemporary would that you think and talk about to be alone..forget it and try to find and seek the better aspect of the life.don ,t expect people more then what they are and you are!
your poem have a good spirit but not perfect.

2006-09-18 19:13:14 · answer #5 · answered by kia1810 1 · 0 0

Depressed and rather be alone
Let me stay within my zone
No one inside my own space
Nothing that I need to evade

But then again
Would this remove the pain?

The perfect person holding your hand -
Why not give him a chance?
That he loves you might be true
All you know, it's hurting him too

2006-09-18 17:33:08 · answer #6 · answered by TK 4 · 0 0

If it's become a problem.
It is a problem.
If you can't solve them.
What can you solve then.
You matter to yourself.
Be true and you'll need not help.
Someone else is searching too.
He's in stealth and feeling blue.

2006-09-18 16:27:59 · answer #7 · answered by Thin King 3 · 0 0

I love it! Been there myself a few times. Well put, dear. Keep your chin up.

2006-09-18 17:02:36 · answer #8 · answered by hrh_gracee 5 · 0 0

"no man is an island." I guess it's a good thing your a lady.

2006-09-18 16:38:19 · answer #9 · answered by Mister Farlay 2 · 0 0

it's okay
stop looking for love it will happen when you least expect it

2006-09-18 18:01:44 · answer #10 · answered by Znai 2 · 0 0

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