ONLY A FRIEND
thought you were mine?
you were my valentine.
but you acted a fool!
and used me like a tool!
now your outta my life,
and im kinda sad.
cause you said the wrong thing,
and made me real mad !
i wanna go back !
and try starting again,
but how can i?
when your now only a friend.
2006-09-18 12:28:44 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
its supposed to sound a little sad
i broke up w my bf 2day
2006-09-18 12:34:23 · update #1
i like that you shared your feelings so honestly. rhyming can sometimes make it harder to express your real feelings, though it makes a poem flow; you did a nice job.
one question i was left with..... why is being "only a friend" not such a good thing? when is friendship not valuable? i think you should keep up the writing.... : )
2006-09-18 12:41:00 · answer #1 · answered by maM Astar 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thought you were mine,
Why did I call you my Valentine?
You played me for a fool,
Tossed me like a tool.
Your out of my life now
And it makes me sad,
Why did you have to say that?
I am really mad!
I want to start over again,
But how can I,
Your just a friend.
2006-09-18 19:48:24 · answer #2 · answered by YAHOO SUCKS ASS 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a great poem. But here's some questions for you. Why did you write this poem? Did this happen to you? Are you trying to become a poet or a you writing for fun?
2006-09-18 19:33:34 · answer #3 · answered by koolgrl44 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do not know much about poems, but sounds good to me!!1
2006-09-18 19:32:52 · answer #4 · answered by mustanglady 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've read several poems on this site now, I think we all need to go to poem school. Roses are red, Violets are blue, your poem just bled all over my shoe. sorry.
2006-09-18 19:45:19 · answer #5 · answered by Forever 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute but sounds kinda sad
2006-09-18 19:32:44 · answer #6 · answered by 2"CUTE"2B30 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think thats a good poem i like to write pomes to
2006-09-18 19:34:45 · answer #7 · answered by HARLEYY 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! It's nice. Good job! I could really feel that you expressed your feelings.
2006-09-18 19:31:22 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is a grest poem my opinion is whoever gets it
is really something special too you
2006-09-18 19:31:52 · answer #9 · answered by ~^~ M.Lay ~^~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cute, try making it a little longer, adding more feelings to it
2006-09-18 19:32:07 · answer #10 · answered by Hannah 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋