3 levels of development
There were not always three levels of development, at one time there were only two levels they were the Eastern bloc and the Western bloc. After world war II people started using two terms first world and second world, but with much gray areas they began to notice they needed another specification so the third world was proclaimed in the 1950’s. Even now that we have the three levels there are still many countries that lie somewhere in the middle of some of them.
2006-09-18 11:30:03 · 7 answers · asked by HoTtIe_WiTh_a_BoDy 2 in Politics & Government ➔ Other - Politics & Government
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3 levels of development
Before World War II there were only two levels of development Eastern bloc and Western bloc. Then after world war II people started realizing they needed more then those terms so they came up with first world and second world. There were too much gray areas they began to notice they needed another specification, the third world was proclaimed in the 1950’s. Even now that we have the three levels there are still many countries that lie somewhere in the middle of some of them.
2006-09-18 11:41:32 · update #1
...two levels. They were...
two terms, first world and second world. There was still too much gray area...
three levels, there...
...in the middle of them.
Hope this helps some. Good job!
2006-09-18 11:43:31 · answer #1 · answered by gtkaren 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Child, have they never taught you punctuation?
There were not always three levels of economic development. At one time it was divided into the Eastern bloc and the Western bloc. After World War II, people started using the terms "first world" and "second world", but with so many gray areas another designation was needed. In the 1950's the specification of "third world" was added. Even now, with so many countries that lie somewhere in the middle, these are the three levels still in use.
Your paragraph has all the right points in it. You just need to smooth out your transitions between them a bit. Good luck.
2006-09-18 11:47:35 · answer #2 · answered by lockesmith 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Most important is, that countries which belonged to the Eastern bloc (which were part of the Soviet Union, but are now independent) are now economically on a third world level. What you call the "Eastern bloc" does no longer exist, only some nations like North Corea have still a stalinist government, but are not linked with each other.
There has always been politically a "third world", the group of states that calls themselves bloc-free.
The first use of social levels was found within states, and there were three levels: the upper class, the middle class and the lower class.
2006-09-18 11:50:51 · answer #3 · answered by corleone 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
See if you like it if you start with the word "Originally", or pick something similar that expresses what you want to say
Look "level" up in a thesaurus. See if you can find another term you like.
Capitalize "World War II"
Which sounds better "much gray areas" or "many gray areas"?
Keep plugging. It's a lot of hard work to learn to express difficult concepts effectively.
2006-09-18 11:44:58 · answer #4 · answered by novangelis 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the grammar is a little off, and you don't have a very captivating introduction, but I can see where your paper might lead to. I'd work on it a little bit more and expand your ideas. Other then that, its decent.
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2016-10-01 03:06:38 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too confusing. run on sentences. you are trying too hard. relax and write like you are talking to a friend. of course if you use slang, don't.
2006-09-18 11:36:52 · answer #7 · answered by Suzi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋