Do i gotta ask this question twice? this is 911 help to me:)?

Question

So i had 2 take a pic of smthg that relates to physics and then write 1 paragraph about it and write a creative title.
i took a pic of the sun and wrote this paragraph:

The largest object in the solar system, the sun, relates to physics in several ways. The sun relates to physics by gravity, being the ultimate source of energy, and mass. The sun mvoes without our galaxy. Our galaxy is called the milkway. Our galaxy moves relative to other galaxies. The whole universe is expanding. Space is all about motion and physics is all about motion.


Help needed in:
1 .I can come up with a title.
2. is this info correct?
3. should i add smthg to be more specific?
4. should i change smthg?


I'll ask you guys bout my other pics later :)
And, plz don't be jerks !!!

Additional Details

6 minutes ago
SRY WITHIN NOT WITHOUT! :)

Answer 1

To do your homework in a way that meets the real purpose of the assignment, look at any general physics book and see what it talks about. That could give you millions of ideas. If you can't get to a library to look at a book, see the reference. If someone else gives you the title, then it's not creative for you.

Answer 2

info
- ultimate source of mass - I think that's incorrect
- mvoes without our galaxy - this needs work
- Our galaxy is called the milkway - not correct
- Space is all about motion - what happened to time.

Answer 3

If this is for a Grade 1 or 2 class, then it's fine.

Answer 4

I think you should study english before physics,are you putting up this question on a cell phone? As its hard to understand what you want to know.

Answer 5

You say physics is all about motion. But the SUN never moves!!! Does it?

Change the topic to AUTOMOBILES. Lots of pictures...lots of motion...Lots of specifications.
All PHYSICS.

Answer 6

make some transistions in the paragraph so it's not so choppie then go more indepth

Answer 7

OK, but don't forget about spellchecker. milky way