alone
i m in this cyclone
i live on my own
alone
i can't moan
i just groan[slinker-*]
i m alone
i live on my own[as u wanted me to
due to u
i stand in a queue\just missin u[why do u change in a matter of few]
i miss u so much
u will never get such
(life without me)[*]
[baby sometimes we r out of path
it is better to make a new start]
the day when i left u
i was like a dry dew
i couldn't live without u
just realize it soon
till the end of the doom[*]
one day u would just come walking to me'
nd this is the future i can see.
when we were in love'no one realized it soon
till the day when there was no moon
[this was the beggining of the doom]
i m alone
i live on my own[as u wanted me to]
alloonee...
i live on my own
alloonee...
[neglect the mistakes]please
2006-09-18 01:54:25 · 9 answers · asked by Cool freaky dj. 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
would girls[hot] girls like it
2006-09-18 01:59:18 · update #1
forget the additional thing.okay
2006-09-18 02:05:47 · update #2
love it thOo madd hot
2006-09-18 02:31:25 · answer #1 · answered by nanahomie116 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have been dumped and you are still in love with this person. A little sad, but I like it.
2006-09-18 09:03:39 · answer #2 · answered by flip103158 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its good you young lyricist. Keep it up.
2006-09-18 09:13:38 · answer #3 · answered by hpfaN 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice, nice ... i want to see the next thing you write!
2006-09-18 09:01:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
u won t pi.s.s. her off next time will ya
2006-09-18 09:20:11 · answer #5 · answered by twopipes1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
girls will dig it.
2006-09-18 09:01:36 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW YOU WROTE THIS? I LIKE IT
2006-09-18 08:58:14 · answer #7 · answered by areyou4me_80 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good
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2006-09-18 08:56:26 · answer #8 · answered by wanda 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice....
2006-09-18 09:01:58 · answer #9 · answered by Laurie R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋