hey i have an english project and i was wondering what do u think of this poem? its not mine so be honest i need good ones.....
together we laughed
with you i cried
but you never told me the truth
now at me you laugh
alone i now cry
because you never told me the truth
2006-09-17 18:12:57 · 11 answers · asked by GONE 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
the real question is do YOU connect with the poem. it doesn't matter what others think, it is poetry, it does not need to have a set structure, subject or meaning.
2006-09-17 18:36:21 · answer #1 · answered by straightup 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Meh its OK. The wording dosn't flow very well. And the subject is a little cliche.
Any more details you can give us on this project? Does it have to be by someone in class, or someone famous? What is the assignment exactly?
2006-09-18 01:22:56 · answer #2 · answered by kerozene 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think it's a good poem, cause it uses contradiction too many times. I don't get the meaning. What is it supposed to mean anyway? And are you sure that's all the poem? Cause maybe if there is more, the meaning would be clearer.
2006-09-18 01:22:51 · answer #3 · answered by angela 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't care for it myself. What is the English project supposed to accomplish? Maybe if you analyze the rather tortured grammatical structure which disrupts rather than enhances the rhythm of the lines, it would be an appropriate illustration for your paper.
2006-09-18 04:00:22 · answer #4 · answered by auntb93again 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is not much there. I'm not a fan of simple poetry but thats just how i fill
2006-09-18 02:26:37 · answer #5 · answered by Jonathan Poole 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Crap. Maybe if it was written a biiit better.
Hey! Why don't you try your hand at it? It doesn't have to rhyme, you know? And you may learn you have a new talent & a new hobby.
2006-09-18 04:43:30 · answer #6 · answered by neil.ferns 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Truthfully and not trying to be mean, I dont like it at all, I mean it seems like those love-sick puppies who make these stupid things they call poetry....sorry again not meaning to hurt anybody.
2006-09-18 06:55:56 · answer #7 · answered by elham1991 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Better not. I wouldn't say it's good poetry. Rather cliche.
2006-09-18 04:00:31 · answer #8 · answered by nelabis 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not diggin' it.
how 'bout this one:
"not wound, nor pain
grieves me so much
as knowing
the hand that held the knife."
2006-09-18 01:34:09 · answer #9 · answered by sweets 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its simple and sweet.
2006-09-18 10:27:08 · answer #10 · answered by (^_^) 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋