a poem by lester chanee- what do you think?

Question

once upon the cliffs i stood and looked out to the sea
and dreamed of kingdoms far, far away
the camelots, the shangri-las, the golden isle o darrows
and for a fleeting moment there, my soul in sweet repose
i rested from a world fraugt with confusion

i felt a peace i'd never known. a warmth encompassed me
and from within i heard a small voice say
you'll top the crest. you'll cross the tide,have the world tomorrow
be strong. you'll conquer summer's sun and winter's icy snows
but alas, my dream was but a sweet illusion

Answer 1

Ok here's what I think.






If the ocean was Bourbon and I were a duck I'd swim to the bottom and drink my way up. But the oceans not Bourbon and I'm not a duck. So pass me that bottle and shut the phuck up.

Answer 2

Dont hit the mark for me. I prefer the duck one