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I got hell lots of idea on my head, but once I have paper or computer in front of me, I never make even one nice paragraph.. Any help?

2006-09-16 16:58:27 · 6 answers · asked by polaris_innocent 2 in Entertainment & Music Other - Entertainment

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You won't know if the ideas are solid in terms of telling a story that would interest others until you get the words on the paper. You have to know your subject. You have to know it well so that you are a mini expert on the general subject area and can speak about it with authority. If you are writing a story about a coach (high school) in cahoots with a local business where money is changing hands to get the players, their friends and families to buy from a particular dealer/store/business, etc. then you have to reseach the laws/school regulations about such a connection and find a case in law that addresses it. You have to listen to how a coach talks and visit the kind of store/business he is in cahoots with and ask questions about the business. You can tell the owner that you are researching a story - fiction - and you are a reporter who keeps info confidential. Then you do that. You get the idea.

Then, you plot out your story so that you have a beginning, middle and end (with payoff). You cast the characters and write a biography for the principals so you can get their voice right. If coach's wife is alcoholic, you have to research the language of an alcoholic wife getting desperate and making threats, etc. If a cop enters the picture you have to know cop talk - so you contact your local p.d. and ride with a cop and ask questions. Research, research, research.

Then, when you sit down to write you visualize the action and the characters. You write off the top of your head. Just let the words come out and you do not worry about the literary value of the sentences, dialogue, etc. That will be dealt with when you begin a second draft. You are having trouble getting words down because you have not done the work up front. Also, you are not letting your brain move into imagination and picturing the action and characters. How do you describe the wife throwing one of the coach's awards at him as she spits out her words if you cannot visualize it and hear it. Once you learn the technique through practice, it comes naturally.

Also, you write simple stories, a few paragraphs long and tell a mino drama or comedy.

You should be on school newspaper. You should talk with a local reporter. You should go to your library - city/conty - and talke with research librarian to learn how to research and to ask if she knows of local writers of fiction/non-fiction, whatever you are writing. Ask if she would make contact and see if you could talk with the writer for any amount of time you can get or, can the writer direct you to another person, etc.

Do the work and develop your talent and you will write the book and if it is good, it gets published. If it is good but not a popular subject, you can publish on line.

But give it up if you are not willing to learn discipline!!!!

2006-09-16 17:18:48 · answer #1 · answered by ALWAYS GOTTA KNOW 5 · 0 0

First, do not despair over what you think is "bad" writing. Everyone, when they are just beginning, or if they are not yet masters of their trade, makes mistakes. Everyone has to start somewhere. You have to be careful not to focus on your mistakes or else you may develop a phobia for writing.
Write every single day, even if you don't feel like it. Set aside at least a little time just for writing. And most of the writing you do should be in a private notebook, one that you know no one else will see. That way you can write uninhibitedly and your thoughts can really flow without you worrying what some else will think. Especially when writing a first draft or even if it's not a draft, if it's just writing for the sake of writing, don't try to make it sound all stylized right away. That's what revision is for. You might write five pages and have most of the pages filled with incoherent nonsense, just stream of conscious, random thoughts that don't even pertain to what you had initially intended to write about, and that's okay. You might end up with pages and pages of what you think is junk, and end up with a little of what you think is gold. But how else would that gold have been discovered?
Don't think too much about how it's going to sound before the words are even written because that will cause you to censor your thoughts. Let the nonsense and junk out onto the paper, just get it out of your system, even if it sounds ridiculous. Otherwise that ridiculous thought will keep popping up and it needs to come out eventually, regardless of whether or not it is of any use. WRITE DRUNK, REVISE SOBER(not my quote by the way, I forget who said it).
Also, reading helps your writing improve. By observing ways in which other authors write, it will improve your own. Don't copy, just observe and admire, as an aspiring athlete might do with a pro athlete. And you don't need to try and use a bunch of big, fancy words. Let your vocabulary grow naturally and use it naturally or you will sound stuffy and pedantic. Check out Charles Bukowski, he's my favorite author.

2006-09-16 17:20:13 · answer #2 · answered by conundrum 1 · 0 0

This works for me for story type writing which I am assuming you are doing.

Always have a pad and pencil near by.
Write or scribble down your ideas as they come to you, doesn't need grammar or correct writing just get the idea on paper.
when you are ready reread your notes and flesh it out with some character development. Remember the story has a beginning middle and end, write it in parts like that. If you watch movies or read books you can see this 3 part structure everywhere. There are tons of books that can explain the story writing process in greater detail. Don't try to sit and write a story front to back write it in scribble on paper then polish it little by little if you have to think about your first paragraph you'll never get it like that.

2006-09-16 17:16:41 · answer #3 · answered by knujefp 4 · 1 0

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2016-10-15 02:04:56 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Besides ideas you need a lot of imagination in other words you have to right a story in your mind, and right it. at the same time correcting what it doesn't match with the part of the subject

2006-09-16 17:04:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I am a struggling amateur writer myself.
My suggestion is to write down your ideas first.
ex: 1800's teen is sent off to Civil War by evil orphanage mistress, comes beck war hero.

Just try to outline ideas first, then see if they pan out.

2006-09-16 17:03:24 · answer #6 · answered by Truthseeker16 1 · 0 0

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