whatcha think of my song???????????
In Doubt (of u and me)
Sometimes I feel like my life's a wonder
and sometimes i feel like im ten feet under
(bridge)
right now i feel confused depressed and hurt
like im falling
what is this worth?
what is this worth?
(chorus)
when u broke my heart what was that about?
u knew it was done from the start
but now my hearts in doubt
i wanna do something
but u ruined my life
this is the end of line
if u and me, baby
its like u knew it was me
calling ur phone
like u were ignoring me
or did u wanna be alone?
(bridge)
(chorus)
when u broke my heart(change keys of heart while lasting it a while)
(chorus)
(backup vocals) and now im empty,
i just dont get what i did wrong
(backup vocals) and now im empty,
i thought i could be strong
(speaks) i can do anything
thats it whatcha think?
thank u so much for reading!
2006-09-15 21:57:44 · 3 answers · asked by .oh snap.london bridge.oh snap. 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
its rockish, popish
2006-09-15 22:02:58 · update #1
its rockish, popish
2006-09-15 22:02:59 · update #2
Cool,
like an Ice cream.
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2006-09-15 22:05:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hey, i really like that, your lyrics are quite good. Im sure it sounds really great too. Keep up the good work! :)
2006-09-15 22:07:56 · answer #2 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's nice but only one question,whats the tone?
2006-09-15 22:02:20 · answer #3 · answered by belai 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋