as i look out into the black murky waters
i see something swimming to me
it is so hazy that i cant make it out
as i stand in fear and anticipation
it seems like an eternity
but then suddenly it makes itself known to me
i stand in wonder and awe as i see the fiendish THING.
and a realization hits me with the force of a strong west wind
as i realize
it is only my cousin Thurman.
2006-09-15 16:09:16 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Not bad, blackmule! Have you shown your poem to your cousin Thurman yet?
2006-09-15 16:15:04 · answer #1 · answered by Scottie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This could be made into a horror story like a Steven King book. You show promise, why don't you leave poems and go for short stories?
2006-09-15 23:25:41 · answer #2 · answered by Dale 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DREAM on pal DREAM on.
You fu**ing inbread piece of sh**
2006-09-16 07:50:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
don't quit your day job
2006-09-15 23:14:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋