when i was small i had a dream
my goals were in sight
but when i grew older
my dog bit me one night
the next day i bit my dog
the next day i bit my neighbor
as i stop and think about it
it makes my jaws hurt
like when i eat a sour pickle
and i am still looking forward
to the goals i had as a little child
i may find them yet i dont know
only time will tell
and if i find them
i know that i will never
eat a sour pickle again...........(shakespear)
2006-09-15 15:49:22 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
You need to get a job. You fu**ing doal dosser.
By the looks of your photo you also need to go on a diet.
O dear going to cry run down to the fridge and eat some cake.
LEAVE ME ALONE
or i will get nastyer.
2006-09-16 00:54:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neither will I! I hate sour pickles!
2006-09-15 22:55:36 · answer #2 · answered by Sooj 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What can I say, it's cute, but I don't think you will become famous from it or find a publisher if that's an example of what you are writing these day.
2006-09-15 22:54:26 · answer #3 · answered by Dale 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are another Hemingway!!! Or and Edger Allen Poe. I get so hot reading your poetry.
2006-09-15 23:08:17 · answer #4 · answered by lady_bird_2000us 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To be honest, it's too rhymey and you're trying way to hard to be artsy.
2006-09-15 22:52:51 · answer #5 · answered by 90210 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummm- lay off the angel dust
2006-09-15 22:52:53 · answer #6 · answered by ♥michele♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well .... u have an imagination... thats bout all i have to say about this subject.
2006-09-15 22:58:21 · answer #7 · answered by poopsy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's amusing, but not really stimulating
2006-09-15 22:54:51 · answer #8 · answered by Zu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its okay but, kinda pointless
2006-09-15 22:54:36 · answer #9 · answered by crazed1511 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not so much.
2006-09-15 22:58:42 · answer #10 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋