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i have to make up an ending for a story in my english class. it is 'the mysteries of the heart' by nigel hinton. it is about a boy who is good at finding stuff, and he finds out that the dad who he lives with is not his real dad, and is only his sisters dad. his mum has gone shopping and his dad and sister are out fishing. it ends with ...

alan (the boy) laughed and said out loud, " they don't call me sherlock for nothing".
Then he turned and pressed his face into his pillow. The pain had come much earlier than he had expected. And with the pain came the tears.

please help me

2006-09-15 06:37:31 · 2 answers · asked by *kiri* 2 in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Put yourself into the story and think of how you would feel. Start by writing down some feelings and ideas of what may happen in the future. Then let it flow from there. You should just write freely and then you can put it into a story format and edit for grammar, spelling stc..

2006-09-15 06:42:10 · answer #1 · answered by ajatur 2 · 0 0

...he went out in the backyard and ran toward the forest. Their dog followed him, and later, in the evening they came back with a bunch of flowers and some berries.

2006-09-15 13:41:22 · answer #2 · answered by tatal_nostru2006 5 · 0 0

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